I
have a lot of people who I want to spend time with. Because my family and most
of my friends are far away from me right now, I can count more than 30 persons
who I like to have dinner and talk with. However, you ask to choose one, so I
will prefer to call my younger brother who is Rasheed.
Rasheed
is 24 years old, and he works for Saudi National Guard as a lieutenant in legal
department. He is married, he just got married 3 months ago, and I could not
attend his wedding ceremony because I was in Austin, so I am dying to see him.
He is funny and knowledgeable, so I can laugh and learn with him. Also, he has
many stories about his work and cases that he had to do in his job as a lawyer.
Even though I have 3 lovely brothers and one sister, I like Rasheed because he
is the nearest of my age.
My
brother and I; I think, will like to meet at our hometown, Jeddah, Saudi
Arabia. We have the same disposition, so I think we will choose to have a
dinner in our favorite Lebanese restaurant.
Based
on Rasheed’s characters, I think we will talk about funny things. We had the
same memories, and we do not get bored of repeating same stories and laugh on
them. Also, we can talk about his experience of marriage because I will get
married soon.
We
had lived and studied together before we employed and separate from each other.
He has gone to work in Riyadh, and I came here to the U.S.A to study. I miss
him a lot, and I like to see him soon.
I'm sorry to hear that you couldn't attend your brother's wedding. However, you have nice writing and I, in my opinion, prefer to remove the first 'Who' because it sounds weird. Last thing is which Lebanese restaurant is you favorite one ? (;
ReplyDeleteHi, Majed!
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry that you coudn't be on your brother's wedding. But it is very good that you have so good relationship with your brother. Besides, your grammar and style are good!
Hello Majed,
ReplyDeleteit is always good to have brother like Rasheed. I am really sorry because you could not attend your brother's wedding. I think Lebanese restaurant is a good choice. I like Lebanese food though. However, you just remained me of my older brother I could not see him for one and half year because the day I traveled to The United states was the day after his flight going back home after he graduated from UK, but that is O.K. I like your choice, and I hope your relationship with your brother stay as well as it or even becomes better.
I think you are the only person who actually chose someone younger than you! I bet your brother would be very proud if read this blog post.
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