Choosing our features sometime is out
of our choice. We can choose to be active, healthy, nice, or patient, but we
can not control our appearance or mental abilities. Anyway, if I have two
choices to be smart ugly person or to be dump beautiful, I will choose the
smartness without hesitation.
Being smart is one of the most
important things to obtain the highest positions in life, but it is ability
that we can not gain it. People derive this ability from their antecedents, so
it is not controllable. Even if I have to be ugly, educated people judge others
by their ideas not appearance. Also, intelligence opens doors of good job and
high positions, so the life will be easier and more convenient.
A beautiful and dump person is the
other choice that I will not choose; even though, being beautiful is
attractive, but being dump is the worst thing I can imagine in my life. It will
be easy to make friends because your look, but they will leave you when they
recognize your stupidity. No one can stand dump people unless other dumps, so
they will like him or her because his or her appearance.
Regardless of appearance, people like
to deal with smart people. Because of their sense in relations, they have the
ability to convince others of their personality. Even if people at the first
moment are attracted by beautiful persons, they will change their thoughts
after first conversation with them.
Hi Majed
ReplyDeleteyour job is nice and you use advance world ,but I think you need to write more .
thanks
manal
Thanks Manal, I'll try if the topic is more interesting.
Deletehello majed.. your essay is really good. I like your using of vocabularies and word forms like controllable and smartness. I disagree with you in one point, I think people if they born not smart they can educate them selves to be smart, so it is something you can gain.
ReplyDeleteThank you Anas.
DeleteI believe that we can gain knowledge, but we couldn't gain smartness.
Hello Majed,
ReplyDeleteYou did nice job, Being smart or dumb isn't controllable. People attract to the handsome person but if he's foolish, they will ignore him. But be careful with word 'dump' because it means other meaning that it doesn't relate to our argument.
Good luck :)
Oops I meant dumb, thanks Mohammed.
DeleteSo you don't think this topic is interesting? I see you comment to Manal! I'll try harder next time :)
ReplyDeleteI think you are right about beautiful people making friends easily, but it doesn't last too long. People look for substance over style. I also like how you make a distinction between knowledge and smartness. That's interesting.
Hi Matt,
DeleteI believe that it doesn't matter if it interesting or not because if I face same question in test or in my study, I have to do it.
In one of my IELTS experience, they gave me what's better for child the internet or school !! It's not interesting, and the answer is obvious, but they aim to test my supporting ways.
For sure everyone will choose smartness, but the point is how to support your choice.